Presentation of El mundo oculto (The World Unseen), by Shamim Sarif in San Juan, Puerto Rico, May 2016.
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The World Unseen, by Shamim Sarif: Translation Presentation
by Roslyn C. Famous
Let me begin by saying that I am honored to have been asked to be here.
When Patricia first called me to ask me to be on the panel, I was at
once flattered and frightened.
While I AM a translator and a grand admirer of both the art and the
craft of literary translation, I am NOT a literary translator. It is an
arduous craft that requires a depth of literary skills and patience.
Now, while I can eventually learn the literary skills, it’s the patience
and a long attention span that I cannot.
So I come before you all tonight as a representative of a casual bilingual reader who knows about translating.
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Set in South Africa in the early 50’s, THE WORLD UNSEEN by Shamim Sarif
is a novel that, in my opinion, stands out for its cinematic
descriptions and narration. In other words, you feel like you are at the
movies.
What makes the novel so great for me is Ms. Sarif’s ability to paint
brilliant imagery with the brush strokes of simple text and dialogue
that move you—breathlessly and with great anticipation—from one chapter
to the next. I liken her novel to impressionist artwork painted solely
with primary colors.
Secondly, the author describes emotions so well that that reader immediately identifies and empathizes with the characters.
From the very beginning, this is a book that instantly jolts you into
tense moments that spark your curiosity. As you read along, you soon
realize that the first chapter was only the start of the emotional
rollercoaster that keeps you turning page after page, as it takes you
from one climatic moment to the next.
I mean, like, the book is 315 pages long, and when I got to page 307 it STILL felt like a cliff hanger.
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So with all that in mind, the question NOW is: how does one appreciate
the translation? What are the hallmarks of a translation worthy of
recognition?
Well for me, in a work such as this, I’m less concerned about whether
the translator—in this case, PATRICIA, found the precise word. As an
“accidental translation critic”, I am more interested in finding out if
the reader of the translation experiences the same emotions, the same
thoughts, the same context, and same writing style as the reader of the
original text. That, to me, is my litmus test.
And in my assessment, Patricia PASSED that test. She deftly transmits the simplistic, cinematic writing style of Ms. Sarif.
And let me tell you, I tested this with the most “scientifically proven”
method possible. I’ll let you in on the secret: I… would flip back and
forth between the two books. Yep. Totally legit science.
What impressed me was just how seamless it was to do this. I could read
one chapter in English, and the next chapter in Spanish and feel that
both were written by the same person.
What’s the big deal, you say? That can’t be too hard, right? Wrong.
Writing style is as personal and unique as the way we think and dress.
And finding someone who shares your style is a special moment. To echo
the style of the original author so flawlessly is a feat worthy of
admiration.
Patricia spoke to me and mentioned how one of the things that first drew
her attention to the book was her affinity for the author’s writing
style. I’d have to agree.
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As mentioned earlier, another characteristic of Ms. Sarif’s writing
style is her ability to engulf the reader in the emotions, tension,
suspension, and tenderness of her novel.
Without giving away any part of the plot, all I can say is that there is
one scene that had me on the edge of my seat, my heartbeat racing with
each word, and identifying with the protagonist’s fear. So much so, that
at one point, as I was lying in bed, I literally screamed a dramatic
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!, leaped up, threw the book aside, and was terrified to
turn the page and find out what would happen next.
THAT, ladies and gentleman, is pure magic.
That ability for a story teller to awaken your imagination with a specific combination of words is a beautiful skill.
Recreating that magic in another language is, to me, one of the hardest
challenges of translating literature. For it’s not just a matter of
opening a dictionary and picking any word, it’s about understanding the
power of words.
Patricia masterfully recaptured that magic in her translation. I’ll use an example that doesn’t give away the plot.
So, imagine this: A young wife is being sent back to India because she
“shamed” her husband and his family. Before leaving, she begged them to
let her take their 1st born son back with her. We are now at the train
station, and her husband has accompanied her and their 2 children as
they board the train. The husband is standing outside on the platform:
[PATRICIA READ PAGE 140-142]
As I said: PURE. MAGIC.
This is but one of many emotional scenes, each of which was brilliantly translated by Patricia.
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Congratulations Patricia, on finding this gem and sharing your act of
love with the Spanish-speaking world. Thank you for uncovering yet
another layer of THE WORLD UNSEEN.
And thank you, for bestowing me the honor of being here.
El mundo oculto (
The World Unseen), by Shamim Sarif
Translated by Patricia Schaefer Röder
Ediciones Scriba NYC
ISBN: 978-0-9845727-3-1
Buy it here
